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Heh. Was just being nit-picky for the sake of it. You did a good job, and you can sorta make the rhythm sound correct if you read it slightly differently. Writing structured poetry is srs bsns.
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The deep meaning of that last verse is not lost to us
Your meter is off. :<
Yeah, I took a risk with this since I’m not very well versed in writing poetry. But, I hope to get better at it with more practice and understanding.
Heh. Was just being nit-picky for the sake of it. You did a good job, and you can sorta make the rhythm sound correct if you read it slightly differently. Writing structured poetry is srs bsns.
Yesss, damnation! I will shuffle this mortal coil before even our kind go traipsing beyond our own star! >_<
I feel you sister, I feel you